逸峰 (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)

弯弓一箭射穹隆
镝落红尘悄失踪
骋目跟随飞矢急
凡睛不敌疾飚风 (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)

倾臆啸空歌一曲
回声堕地寂无踪
人间谁具通天眼
逐韵追音极碧穹 (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)

数易春秋橡木中
射天遗箭露全锋
别来无恙当年曲
挚友萦心完璧逢 (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)

注：
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2007年8月31日逸庐 (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)

附录
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow 原作： (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)

The Arrow And The Song (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)

I shot an arrow into the air,
It fell to earth, I knew not where;
For so swiftly it flew, the sight
Could not follow it in its flight. (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)

I breathed a song into the air,
It fell to earth, I knew not where;
For who has sight so keen and strong,
That it can follow the flight of song? (海纳百川 www.hjclub.info)