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作者：Anonymous 在 罕见奇谈 发贴, 来自 http://www.hjclub.org
Poetical works have many branches according to their contents. This is one of the millitary poems. You could show yours in a comparison with this one.
Indeed, I have made so little progress in poetical works and thus, so far I only published a few hundreds. In comparison with this one, I think my emotion is not so "hot" as the authour's.
You can point out the weakness of the work, which is another way in judging the value of literature works. But to say "it is not good" is merely too weak to believe.
作者：Anonymous 在 罕见奇谈 发贴, 来自 http://www.hjclub.org |
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