随便
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作者：随便 在 罕见奇谈 发贴, 来自 http://www.hjclub.org
没那个本事就别写英文。你看看你写的这叫什么什么东西，还“诗”呢。
俺只提几点原则，你自己改吧。
1。时态。
2。语法。
3。冠词。
4。介词。
你在所有这些方面都犯了可以判五年以上徒刑的错误。你请其他网友指
教你吧。俺今天没空。
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作者: 牛乐吼 不小心写了首诗， 也来献给刘荻姑娘 10/9/2003 07:50 [Click:70]
They can't hide their fear, so they
confined you in a cell behind iron wall,
They can't face the truth, so they
silence your voice, let the music stop,
They can't cover their acts, so they
smear your name, say all is your fault,
They can't live their own life, so they
want you be one of them, knee down to craw.
We hear your laugh,
We see you stand tall,
We sing happy birth day to you,
We"ll watch them fall.
Tears rolling down, with our
unfaltering fortitude,
this time we refuse to let you go,
leave you alone into darkness.
Freedom will ring, will ring, will ring
for you for me for us all.
作者：随便 在 罕见奇谈 发贴, 来自 http://www.hjclub.org |
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牛乐吼进来
